Make a message clearer
A fictional community group is inviting residents to a free information session. Its draft is difficult to understand. Rewrite it for someone reading quickly on a phone.
The facts you can use
- Original: “Beneficiaries are hereby advised to avail themselves of the sensitisation exercise at the designated facility.”
- The fictional session is at Riverside Community Hall, Saturday at 10 am. Attendance is optional.
- It explains how to find reliable health information. It does not offer clinical consultations.
Your task: Write a short invitation. Include who it is for, what will happen, where and when, and one clear action.
Source & learning support
Read CDC Clear Communication Index ↗ for wider guidance. These fictional exercises are written by ViHLERT; linking a publisher does not imply endorsement.
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